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it perfectly fine...but it feels like some sort of optional essay rather than a ps...may you can condense the Darfur story?

someone else told me this as well. should I delete the third paragraph and add on more to the fourth and fifth paragraphs? or should i just delete the 3rd and be done with it? it would be about a page and a half without that paragraph.

yes! it can do without the third paragraph

is there anything that I should talk more about? or should i just leave it without that paragraph?

the example is good just "show" more of your interest in international law?

I'm actually not interested in international law... I'm interested in regulatory law, though I wasn't really trying to emphasize that much in my PS. I have a very strong technical background that will come across in my resume, so I was trying to talk about interests I have that would be relevant to law... Did I go about this the wrong way?

o h okay your good! i missed the part where you said "fused advocacy" everything ties in.