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referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:01 pm
by canes
with such a long name, what do you think is the most appropriate way to work the name into an essay? Writing out "the University of California Berkeley Boalt Hall School of Law" ruins the flow of any essay, but i dont want to get too casual either

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:03 pm
by AreJay711
canes wrote:with such a long name, what do you think is the most appropriate way to work the name into an essay? Writing out "the University of California Berkeley Boalt Hall School of Law" ruins the flow of any essay, but i dont want to get too casual either
I think they are trying to become known as Berkeley Law rather than Boalt Hall. If you look on their website, they clearly refer to themselves as Berkeley Law. http://www.law.berkeley.edu/about.htm

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:07 pm
by canes
Thanks... I had noticed that, but was wondering if its too informal if its the first time I'm mentioning it in the essay?

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:15 pm
by AreJay711
canes wrote:Thanks... I had noticed that, but was wondering if its too informal if its the first time I'm mentioning it in the essay?

"There is no better place for me to move forward with a commitment to my community than at the Berkeley School of Law, where...."
Yea I know what you mean. It sucks that Berkeley's official name is so long lol. I definitely think you should go with Berkeley Law for the rest of it though, regardless if you decide to go with the full title the first time.

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 5:37 pm
by canes
Frustrating lol... This is the only thing stopping me from sending my app out. In my diversity statement I only refer to the school once and it's to end the essay

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:40 am
by Flips88
I submitted mine today and referred to it as Berkeley Law every time.

Re: referring to boalt in an essay

Posted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 2:25 pm
by canes
Flips88 wrote:I submitted mine today and referred to it as Berkeley Law every time.
That's what I ended up doing.