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Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!
Posted: Mon Nov 22, 2010 8:06 pm
by cntruong
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Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!
Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 11:51 am
by Gotti
Hey we're twins. I wanna study the same thing and I went to UCI too =)
I'll look at your PS later tonight...I'm at work but I just wanted to let you know that someone cared to respond lol.
That being said, I glanced over it & noticed you say tragedy too close together at the end of the first paragraph and the beginning of the 2nd.
Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!
Posted: Tue Nov 23, 2010 7:33 pm
by cntruong
Thanks for responding. Yea, I just noticed the tragedies.. I'll change it up in my revision later. Let me know your thoughts on my paper when you have a chance. It'd be really helpful...
I'd be happy to read your PS if you'd like too! Glad there's a fellow UCI student here, I hadn't seen any....

Re: Final Draft! Hoping to get out tonight.Critiques please!!!
Posted: Tue Nov 30, 2010 6:48 pm
by cntruong
bump?