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PS draft, no clue what to think about it.. Please help!
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 1:19 am
by mreocc
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Re: PS draft, no clue what to think about it.. Please help!
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 1:52 am
by jasonc.
Get rid of the las two paragraphs. Lawschools dont want to know about "dreams" . You have to show good characteristics( which you did with scuba diving) trying to tell us your motivation
Re: PS draft, no clue what to think about it.. Please help!
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:02 am
by The Gentleman
Just a quick thought: using the present verb tense in your opening paragraph didn't feel right. I think it would read better in past tense.
Re: PS draft, no clue what to think about it.. Please help!
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 2:31 am
by 3|ink
The Gentleman wrote:Just a quick thought: using the present verb tense in your opening paragraph didn't feel right. I think it would read better in past tense.
Yeah. He maintained it throughout that paragraph. Past tense would be better.
Re: PS draft, no clue what to think about it.. Please help!
Posted: Wed Nov 17, 2010 3:20 am
by mreocc
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