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Anyone? Is it that bad..?

Most law schools state that you should not exceed the length of two pages double spaced. Yours is 3 pages single spaced (I checked in MS Word). You have already broken one very important rule, which the admissions council WILL notice.
You'll probably get a few responses once you trim it to an acceptable length.

yea, I didn't think it would be so much of a problem. Like I said, I just wanted to get a feeling on the topic... obviously planning to cut it down