One sentence too long!
Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:51 am
My DS is one sentence too long!
Can someone help me edit it? I've been rereading it but can't figure out what I can cut out, or how to reword something.
PM me!
Thanks!!
Can someone help me edit it? I've been rereading it but can't figure out what I can cut out, or how to reword something.
PM me!
Thanks!!