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2nd Draft: Rip me baby one more time!

Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:25 am
by WonkyPanda
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Will rework

Re: 2nd Draft: Rip me baby one more time!

Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 10:41 am
by tortuga28
Don't have time for a full response right now but watch your grammar--last word of second sentence should be "me" not "I."