.
Will rework
2nd Draft: Rip me baby one more time! Forum
- WonkyPanda
- Posts: 346
- Joined: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:35 pm
2nd Draft: Rip me baby one more time!
Last edited by WonkyPanda on Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:30 pm, edited 1 time in total.
-
- Posts: 16
- Joined: Fri Oct 29, 2010 1:10 pm
Re: 2nd Draft: Rip me baby one more time!
Don't have time for a full response right now but watch your grammar--last word of second sentence should be "me" not "I."