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Anyone willing to critique my PS? I CAN READ YOURS TOO
Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 4:24 pm
by JJDancer
It is a very rough draft and also pretty long. I am looking for help on whether the beginning that focuses on childhood/high school is irrelevant and what the strongest parts of my PS are...
Thanks in advance!
Re: Anyone willing to critique my PS? I CAN READ YOURS TOO
Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 7:35 pm
by JJDancer
I've had a lot of people contact me for swaps so I can't read any more drafts right now.
I might post again in a few days when I'm ready with a revised draft. Thanks all for your PMs
Re: Anyone willing to critique my PS? I CAN READ YOURS TOO
Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2010 9:15 pm
by bendtheslurry
I'm more than willing to swap with you...I don't really have a solid conclusion yet but I'm open to any comments! PM me with you email addy!