Quick Comma Question
Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2010 10:15 am
Quick comma related question. The part in question is bold. Should this sentence be either:
1) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open mind, and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
2) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open, mind and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
3) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open, mind, and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
I'm thinking # 1, but someone who edited my statement recommended # 2. Thanks!
1) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open mind, and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
2) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open, mind and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
3) When I begin studying next fall, I will approach law school with a focused, yet open, mind, and plan to fully involve myself with one or more student organizations where I hope to once again make a lasting impact.
I'm thinking # 1, but someone who edited my statement recommended # 2. Thanks!