Revamped PS - Second Draft - Please Offer Input!
Posted: Mon Oct 25, 2010 11:04 pm
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Thanks, I appreciate the compliments.Sandro777 wrote:I like your writing style. I'm going to steal it. It doesnt have "I want to go to law school because XXXX" at the end of beginning so I like that part too.
Well, this was my third try at a statement. I concentrated using active verbs, being descriptive (but not overly so), and adding my own personal thoughts to break the monotony of excessive story-telling. Just keep working at it. I'd also suggest going to your school's writing center, if you're enrolled. It really helped me.Sandro777 wrote:Do you have any tips for translating things that occurred at work into something that isnt boring as hell to read?