Please critique my addendum to disciplinary action
Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 4:04 pm
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What do you guys think?
Anything I should omit / add?
What do you guys think?
Anything I should omit / add?
If it was beer, then consider writing "beer" instead of "alcohol".
DELETE: The first sentence & delete the last two sentences. The result is a concise, one-sentence addendum.