Advice wanted! What topic should I write about?
Posted: Sun Oct 10, 2010 2:15 pm
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I agree. 1 and 3 are better; but heck you could probably even find a way to put some 2 in 3 if you really wanted to.St.Remy wrote:Options 1 or 3 could result in a good Personal Statement if done well. I would not consider option 2 because it highlights what some admissions people probably consider an undesirable quality (aversion to risk taking) and it would make it seem like you are not confident that you would do well at law school (if you consider it a risk).
Wow, you're being stereotypical. OP has already identified him/herself as a nontypical hairstylist since she has a college degree and is thinking about law school. S/he'd write about this exactly to prove people like you wrong. I think it's a good topic.CanadianWolf wrote:Potential problem with number (3) three is that you run the risk of writing too much about others. Problem with number (1) one is that it may be difficult for some to envision a hairstylist--the most braindead of occupations--transitioning to the practice of law. Hairstylists are typified as gossipy & focused on fashion & superficial appearance, while attorneys are supposed to maintain confidentialities & engage in deep thought (i.e., focus on what is underneath the scalp, not what's on top of it).
Oh, whoops. Guess OP is a girl. w/erso11 wrote:Wow, you're being stereotypical. OP has already identified him/herself as a nontypical hairstylist since she has a college degree and is thinking about law school. S/he'd write about this exactly to prove people like you wrong. I think it's a good topic.CanadianWolf wrote:Potential problem with number (3) three is that you run the risk of writing too much about others. Problem with number (1) one is that it may be difficult for some to envision a hairstylist--the most braindead of occupations--transitioning to the practice of law. Hairstylists are typified as gossipy & focused on fashion & superficial appearance, while attorneys are supposed to maintain confidentialities & engage in deep thought (i.e., focus on what is underneath the scalp, not what's on top of it).
OP....you're making 50 bucks an hour, and looking to go to lawschool?KylieMorrison wrote:Wow CanadianWolf, you fit in the same stereotypical category as my client. I work with 7 girls and 6 out of 7 of us have college degrees. It is not a braindead occupation, and being a hairstylist has nothing do to with being unintelligent. I make $50+ an hour by using a skill that a lot of people don't have. If anything, I think it says a lot about someone wanting to do more with their life by using their full intellectual capacity. If an admission officer is going to judge me because I do hair then he/she should not be an admission officer. You would also be surprised to know that hairstylists (successful ones) can engage in deep thought and maintain confidentialities. Our clients treat us like their therapist and we have the ability to gain their trust and develop deep personal relationships with strangers after only a few meetings, something lawyers have to do...
I could probably use your comment over my client's and write a personal statement about that...
reverendt wrote:OP....you're making 50 bucks an hour, and looking to go to lawschool?KylieMorrison wrote:Wow CanadianWolf, you fit in the same stereotypical category as my client. I work with 7 girls and 6 out of 7 of us have college degrees. It is not a braindead occupation, and being a hairstylist has nothing do to with being unintelligent. I make $50+ an hour by using a skill that a lot of people don't have. If anything, I think it says a lot about someone wanting to do more with their life by using their full intellectual capacity. If an admission officer is going to judge me because I do hair then he/she should not be an admission officer. You would also be surprised to know that hairstylists (successful ones) can engage in deep thought and maintain confidentialities. Our clients treat us like their therapist and we have the ability to gain their trust and develop deep personal relationships with strangers after only a few meetings, something lawyers have to do...
I could probably use your comment over my client's and write a personal statement about that...
You do realize it'll probably be quite a while before you make that kind of money again?
Not that there's anything wrong with following your dreams. This is more to life than money. But still, I feel compelled to point this out.
Anyway....good luck!
I wanted advice on what I should write my personal statement about, not about what you thought of my job. And I did not correlate doing hair with being an attorney like you are. Just because you have college educated friends who do hair that you can't envision them as attorneys, does not mean that I won't make a good attorney. You are making a lot of unwarranted assumptions...CanadianWolf wrote:Yes, you do have a lot to overcome. But most, if not all, readers will have had decades of experience with hairstylists & should have their own thoughts. If you can write a convincing & compelling essay on this topic, then do it. Since you asked for opinions, you should be prepared to handle an honest one without stereotyping me as one of your clients.
P.S. Having a college degree is quite common. My last barber had a master's degree in Anthropology & was very angry that the only job he could find was as a barber. He was fired within a month because he frightened customers with his angry disposition while handling sharp objects. True story. I have other college educated friends who own three or four successful hair salons, but I difficulty envisioning them as attorneys.
Just don't overplay the not-willing-to-take-risks part. I like this idea, but if you go with it (or even just 2) you should focus on the positive move you're making toward law school, not how afraid you've been in the past. Definitely skew it.lalalawya wrote:I think you can do a combination of topics one and two. Obviously, going from a hairdresser to a law student is a big risk, just because the fields are entirely unrelated. Perhaps you can discuss how statements like your clients have inspired you to re-consider the direction you would like to take in life, and thus you have decided to take the risk to attend law school...something you have always wanted to do but just never had the courage to try. I don't know, I am having trouble writing my personal statement so I am probably not the best advice giver, but that would be a personal statement that would interest me.
Crucial topic. I would more just mention the interaction (1) briefly then talk about how you are taking a risk. As you first wrote it, it made it seem that you are applying just because you felt inferior after the exchange. Not sure that's a reason that is going to woo admissions officials. Discussing that you want more -- in terms of fulfillment, responsibility, and challenge etc. -- than your current job can provide and how you are willing to have faith in yourself in taking the risk is a great topic. Still, I'd say more 2 than 1. Not saying I think you HAVE to completely take out the exchange but don't play it up.KylieMorrison wrote:I am very appreciative of everyone's comments (realtive to my personal statement). I decided to mostly write about the first choice while incorporating how her comment has given me that extra push needed to step out of my comfort zone so I am including the risk aspect of it too. I am going to make it clear that I dont think law school in itself is a risk, but the circumstances are such as: having to sell my house I just bought, move to a city where I know no one when I have lived in the same town my whole life, quit my job, etc.