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Very rough draft

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:18 pm

by nataliejane38

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Re: Very rough draft

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:43 pm

by CanadianWolf

Well written, convincing & effective--except for the last line.

Re: Very rough draft

Posted: Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:51 pm

by nataliejane38

CanadianWolf wrote:Well written, convincing & effective--except for the last line.

Yeah I knew that sounded cheesy. I will revise...Thanks.