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mrwarre85 wrote:Hey guys this is the start of my PS as it now stands. I'm a tad (significantly) under numbers for this school so I thought I needed to take a chance and start off with a joke. This of course can be risky because its hard for some of us to be funny in writing without the use of body language and tone of voice. That said, humor can be a good play with the adcoms if what I've read in all the interviews is correct.

So... is this funny? After I include the first paragraph to kinda show where I'm trying to go with this.

(True story by the way)

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Personal Statement

A few weeks ago I walked into the University of %%%%% office of Admissions to inquire about my potential candidacy. After speaking about my grades and LSAT scores, I asked her if she had any particular advice for my situation. She responded, “Pray.”


Rather than getting caught up on whether or not her smiling kindly as she told me this was good or bad news, I focused myself on the things that could maximize my chance of being accepted. This I can control. The fact is, eventually I will practice law. I know this because I have the talent and the necessary motivation to achieve this goal. I know this despite the fact that I never maximized my potential on the Analytical Reasoning section of the LSAT. I know this in spite the fact that my time both as a student and practitioner of law will be very challenging. I believe in myself. The question on my mind now is where I will be attending Law school, not why or how. I do not know the answer to that question but I have an overwhelming preference.

hncsarge34 wrote:The PS is a place to discuss your strengths. Whether you're sending an essay to Cooley or Yale, it's never helpful to self deprecate and call out your own weaknesses.

hncsarge34 wrote:The PS is a place to discuss your strengths. Whether you're sending an essay to Cooley or Yale, it's never helpful to self deprecate and call out your own weaknesses.

firemedicprelaw wrote:

hncsarge34 wrote:The PS is a place to discuss your strengths. Whether you're sending an essay to Cooley or Yale, it's never helpful to self deprecate and call out your own weaknesses.

I have a question... because I was thinking about doing something similar...

First paragraph of a rough draft:


I knew, as a fact, that I had the courage to run into a burning building. The question on my mind that day, however, was if I could walk into (Public Interest Law Firm) and take up my duties as an intern there. I wondered if it would have helped if their office had been on fire, and decided it might. My worry stemmed not from a fear that I would not be up to the tasks allotted to me, but rather...

firemedicprelaw wrote:

I knew, as a fact, that I had the courage to run into a burning building. The question on my mind that day, however, was if I could walk into (Public Interest Law Firm) and take up my duties as an intern there. I wondered if it would have helped if their office had been on fire, and decided it might. My worry stemmed not from a fear that I would not be up to the tasks allotted to me, but rather...

revolution724 wrote:

firemedicprelaw wrote:

I knew, as a fact, that I had the courage to run into a burning building. The question on my mind that day, however, was if I could walk into (Public Interest Law Firm) and take up my duties as an intern there. I wondered if it would have helped if their office had been on fire, and decided it might. My worry stemmed not from a fear that I would not be up to the tasks allotted to me, but rather...

But rather, not knowing yet that there isn't a lot of difference between the public interest law firm and a burning building, because there's sure as hell a lot of fires to put out in either case?

hncsarge34 wrote:
It would help to see a little more of the first paragraph, but you're not making the same kind of error. You're talking about being reluctant on the first day of an internship, and I assume the rest of the essay discusses how you successfully grew into the role. The OP is using the PS to acknowledge that his/her numbers are apparently well below the school's medians, and that's just going to further sink the application.

As for your first paragraph, I get the joke but I think you should word it a little differently. Burning buildings aren't something you should wish for. I would just be more straight forward. You're comfortable being a hero and saving people from fires, so it's funny that you're nervous about starting this internship. Sounds like a good start.

bgdddymtty wrote:Allow me to dissent. If your numbers are below average or there is some other deficiency, the PS is a place to show that you have something special to offer the school that makes up for that deficiency. Personality is one of those elements, and one demonstration of that is humor. Your joke is quick, tasteful, funny, and leads to a jumping-off point for the rest of the piece.

Having said that, I think you should make the joke and move on. Your second paragraph belabors the LSAT and grades points, making a separate excuse (not even an excuse, really; more like a dismissal) for each. It also makes it sound like you have a chip on your shoulder. I'd rework the thesis of your PS from (as far as I can tell) "I'm gonna go to law school somewhere; might as well be here" to some sort of explanation of what you bring to the table that should convince the adcomms to admit you despite your numbers.

bgdddymtty wrote:Allow me to dissent. If your numbers are below average or there is some other deficiency, the PS is a place to show that you have something special to offer the school that makes up for that deficiency. Personality is one of those elements, and one demonstration of that is humor. Your joke is quick, tasteful, funny, and leads to a jumping-off point for the rest of the piece.

Having said that, I think you should make the joke and move on. Your second paragraph belabors the LSAT and grades points, making a separate excuse (not even an excuse, really; more like a dismissal) for each. It also makes it sound like you have a chip on your shoulder. I'd rework the thesis of your PS from (as far as I can tell) "I'm gonna go to law school somewhere; might as well be here" to some sort of explanation of what you bring to the table that should convince the adcomms to admit you despite your numbers.