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Need help with a DS - anyone willing to critique?

Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:22 pm
by trudat15
ANyone willing to read a DS? Very rough first draft, and not nearly strong enough. Will send it over if you are.

Thanks

Re: Need help with a DS - anyone willing to critique?

Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 1:38 am
by trudat15
anyone?

Re: Need help with a DS - anyone willing to critique?

Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:49 am
by thesybarite
Sure I'll have a look. Will take my mind off my own abyss of confusion.

Re: Need help with a DS - anyone willing to critique?

Posted: Tue Sep 07, 2010 1:08 pm
by tea_drinker
I am not sure if I will write one yet, but I can look at your DS if you still need help.