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Critique my addenda

Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:43 pm
by ArchRoark
EDIT: Thanks TommyK -- that was my intention.

Re: Critique my addenda

Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2010 4:46 pm
by TommyK
Seems fine to me. Direct, to the point, not making excuses.