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Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.

Tanicius wrote:Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.

Just cuz you've been really encouraging to me.........send me a PM and i'll give you my general thoughts!

Knockglock wrote:

Tanicius wrote:Hello guys. I'd like to private message my PS. This is the first full, advanced draft of my PS I've managed to write, and so I'm looking for hardcore, macro-level criticisms, as well as iffy judgments you formed as a reader due to certain phrasing/vocab. Anyone willing to read it and provide in depth commentary? As an aside, I like critiquing other PS's myself, so if you're up for a trade so am I.

Just cuz you've been really encouraging to me.........send me a PM and i'll give you my general thoughts!

Thanks a bunch!

I will swap with you. Send it over.

Tiva wrote:I will swap with you. Send it over.

Thank you sir.