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A Splitter's PS
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:40 am
by Marionberry
Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.
Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:33 pm
by Knock
Marionberry wrote:Anyone want to read my PS? It doesn't actually have anything to do with the fact that I'm a splitter, but it needs to be extra good to compensate for my crapfest of a GPA. I'll swap or whatever, I just don't want to post it on here because I'm unreasonably paranoid. It's not crazy or anything, though.
I'll attest that it is a good PS

. Have you changed it much since I last read it?
Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:36 pm
by Marionberry
Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome

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Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Tue Aug 17, 2010 1:37 pm
by Knock
Marionberry wrote:Not really. I don't think that there's much more I can do at this point, but I'm open to any suggestions that might just completely blow my mind and make it that much better. Advice of this nature is welcome

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Haha, I second that request

. I'd pm Billyez and Canadianwolf, they are some of the regulars in the PS forum and helped me out a lot.
Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 3:55 pm
by username99
I'll take a look
Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:16 pm
by ArchRoark
I'll take a look, but I am only feel comfortable speaking to the content/thematic elements rather then grammatical issues.
Re: A Splitter's PS
Posted: Wed Aug 18, 2010 5:25 pm
by mcnabb5
i'll take a look as well