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Personal Statement Second Drafts
Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 2:08 pm
by tipler4213
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Re: Personal Statement Second Drafts
Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:26 pm
by tipler4213
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Re: Personal Statement Second Drafts
Posted: Tue Aug 10, 2010 3:45 pm
by CanadianWolf
I really enjoyed reading both essays. there are minor spelling & grammatical errors, but the overwhelming strength of your writings demonstrates a determined willingness to learn & to excel under difficult circumstances.
P.S. Try not to use, or, rather, misuse, the word "countless". I think that you meant "numerous" when you wrote "countless" in two sentences in your first essay. The only thing that I know of that is countless, ironically, is numbers.