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Here's the deal, I know what my PS will include, I've already written nearly half of it highlighting an academic experience as well as an extracurricular experience both tie-in quite well with the overall theme of the statement. What's left is WE, I'm planning to write that in the next couple of days and I've figured out what it's going to be about; an example of leadership, taking the initiative, having an impact etc....

But today I just wrote the conclusion, I suppose it helped me know how to fill in the rest of my statement, I recognize how it's going to end..

I just need a bit of feedback on it, I like it but its about the law and I'm not sure if they frown on that .. if anyone is willing to take a look and critique PM me ..

thanks,

Sure, and just to add to all those who are reading this I don't think there's anything wrong with this. If a part of your PS comes to you, or an interesting sentence happens to develop in your mind, write it out. You can always synthesize everything together later. There's no reason to get bogged down with writing in sequential order.

thanks