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I'm applying this fall. I have diabetes and was born with a rare condition known as prune belly syndrome where I lack most of my abdominal muscles. I'm starting to work on my PS and was curious if this thesis I wrote was a good place to build from. Let me know what you think.

"My medical challenges shape my character, inspire my educational and career goals, and equip me with the necessary determination to succeed in the study of law."

I think it works as a thesis, but you will need to do a superb job supporting each of your points with a GOOD CORRELATION.

In other words, precisely HOW does your syndrome inspire your educational goals?