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Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:16 am
by CMDantes
Hey all,

I posted my P.S. on here a while ago but have changed it substantially. It's basically new.

It begins in a risky way, describing a moment in my life where I was on the verge of starting up a small 'urban pharmaceuticals' business.

If you're interested, please post and I'll shoot over my P.S.

I'm not afraid to hear brutal commentary, in fact I welcome it (looking at you, justdude)

Thanks.

Re: Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:23 am
by stripedbanana10
I'll take a look. Pm me.

Re: Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 4:41 am
by quickquestionthanks
Shoot it over. PM

Re: Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:07 pm
by OmbreGracieuse
I would be happy to look at it if you still need help. :)

Re: Risky P.S., Looking for critique/trade via P.M

Posted: Mon Apr 12, 2010 6:16 pm
by hellokitty
Bump.

I haven't written it yet, as I am totally changing my application for the 2010-2011 cycle, and I'd like to know if my topic is inappropriate or too risky or might make me look bad to adcomms. If you're willing to give me an honest opinion, I'd love to hear it. PM me for the topic.

Thanks.