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NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 8:36 pm
by RPEYTON365
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Re: NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 8:47 pm
by ConMan345
This needs some pretty serious editing for grammar/punctuation/style.

Re: NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT

Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:43 pm
by 094320
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Re: NEED A CRITIQUE AND CLOSE UNFINISHED PERSONAL STATMENT

Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 3:55 pm
by RPEYTON365
Thanks for the advice!