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anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:55 pm
by jtoppe2
if so, send me a personal message or email me. my email is
jtoppe2@gmail.com.
i really need somebody who can be objective. it seems that my parents, friends and girlfriend have lost that 'objective' quality. thanks!
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Thu Feb 25, 2010 10:04 pm
by NewtonLied
Is your girlfriend hot?
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:40 am
by JustDude
NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?
Not appropriate man!!!!!
OP: Is your mom MILF?
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:42 am
by PigNipple
JustDude wrote:NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?
Not appropriate man!!!!!
OP: Is your mom MILF?
Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:43 am
by JustDude
PigNipple wrote:JustDude wrote:NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?
Not appropriate man!!!!!
OP: Is your mom MILF?
Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?
You think he is DILF?
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 1:45 am
by PigNipple
JustDude wrote:PigNipple wrote:JustDude wrote:NewtonLied wrote:Is your girlfriend hot?
Not appropriate man!!!!!
OP: Is your mom MILF?
Hey, hey, hey guys! What about your dad?
You think he is DILF?
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 2:47 pm
by jtoppe2
yeah, my girlfriend is hot, but my mom is fat. and my dad, i've been told he's a DILF.
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:32 pm
by NewtonLied
jtoppe2 wrote:yeah, my girlfriend is hot, but my mom is fat. and my dad, i've been told he's a DILF.
Well... that took a turn for the unexpected...
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Fri Feb 26, 2010 3:37 pm
by jtoppe2
indeed, it did.
Re: anybody willing to read my first draft (1.5 pages)
Posted: Sat Feb 27, 2010 3:13 am
by JustDude
jtoppe2 wrote:indeed, it did.
I feel like we highjacked you tread.
That was unintentioal and we are sorry.
About your PS. Did you show it to your other relatives/friends??? Are they hot by any chance?