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Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 3:07 pm

by clavell45

draft

Re: (Hopefully) Final Draft of Study Abroad PS - Please Critique

Posted: Tue Feb 23, 2010 5:53 pm

by T14_Scholly

The first paragraph says nothing about you, and has a lot of unnecessary description.