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Do us a favor and read this PS yourself. Then you would have a moral right to ask us to read it and provide feedback. I couldnt find a single sentence without grammar mistake. Hint, sentences could be short. It is impossible to understand. Run on sentences are all over the place. Sentence structure is simply atrocious, and typoes dont make reading easier.


From what I understood (I honestly tried), it's not interesting. You can summirize that in one line in resume "Worked at Casa xxxx-xxxx Did this that and else.

Is English your first language? I honestly think you should just write a new ps, I dont understand the point of this essay.