1st draft PS, please share your thoughts, greatly apprec.
Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 6:23 am
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astorlove wrote:"Boom, boom boom", the continuous [strike]gun shot like[/strike] noise came from outside the building and remembering what a coworker had said did not help put me at ease[strike],[/strike]--it was normal to hear gun shots [strike]going off[/strike]in the middle of the night. The office location [strike]is[/strike] was not a neighborhood one would consider taking a leisurely walk in, end your sentences I proceeded with [strike]cautious[/strike] caution toward the front of the office making sure the door was locked. Looking up at the clock [strike]and[/strike] I saw it was already [strike]passed[/strike] PAST nine o'clock at night and there was [strike]no-one[/strike] no one else in the office[strike],[/strike] . I thought to myself, it was time to wrap up and head home. As I was about to turn off the computer, the loud booming sound felt as if it was just right outside the office building. As I reached over to the phone to call 911, I felt a red glare in the corner of my eye, I slowly turned to the window and I let out a big sigh, I hung up the phone and felt relieved. Looking at the heart shaped fireworks in the dark one after another, reminded me that I have not had the chance to visit the nearby park, the sounds were not from gun shots, they were from the near by amusement park's firework celebration.