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hey guys, I got an extension on my essay for UMich's Darrow scholarship. I was wondering if anyone could take a look at it...PM if you are interested. It feels really boring and crappy to me at the moment. I'll look over a PS as a trade...

I'll make the same offer too (nixxers and I have already swapped).

I'll get in on this too if anyone wants. My Darrow essay is pretty rough right now though.