Where to put the focus of an SES DS
Posted: Tue Oct 23, 2012 4:00 pm
I've written my PS already which explains 'Why law school' and provides a professional/'philosophical' background, but I think I want to write a socio-economic DS also. The problem is, I don't know how to really express my story as 'contributing to the diversity of the LS' without sounding either hackneyed or 'forced'. I don't really think that my situation growing up really does all that much to 'increase' diversity in the same way that someone who was substantially bullied or came from another country or had a cool job contributes to diversity.
That's the bad. The good is that I think I have a compelling story that also helps explain motivation behind going to law school. I would talk about being a first gen graduate son of an immigrant (not URM), not wanting a family of mine to go through what I did, and wanting a career and all of that, and I suppose I would touch on how this distinguishes me from the average person (as none of that in and of itself is notable), but it wouldn't be the focus.
I recognize that I've been a bit vague here but I also just don't want to paraphrase my rough DS. The question I have, I guess, is is it OK if my DS focuses more on how my situation has moved me towards this path? It would be distinct from PS which doesn't mention any of this at all and I think there is a shift in theme as well.
That's the bad. The good is that I think I have a compelling story that also helps explain motivation behind going to law school. I would talk about being a first gen graduate son of an immigrant (not URM), not wanting a family of mine to go through what I did, and wanting a career and all of that, and I suppose I would touch on how this distinguishes me from the average person (as none of that in and of itself is notable), but it wouldn't be the focus.
I recognize that I've been a bit vague here but I also just don't want to paraphrase my rough DS. The question I have, I guess, is is it OK if my DS focuses more on how my situation has moved me towards this path? It would be distinct from PS which doesn't mention any of this at all and I think there is a shift in theme as well.