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Need help with my DS
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 1:41 pm
by amc987
Hey all,
I am struggling to cut down and perfect my diversity statement before I submit it. Would anyone be willing to read it and give me tips about things i could truncate and improve??
I would really appreciate it!! PM me for details. I'm a little leery of posting the whole thing in a publicly accessible forum...
Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Sat Oct 08, 2011 8:21 pm
by Blessedassurance
amc987 wrote:Hey all,
I am struggling to cut down and perfect my diversity statement before I submit it. Would anyone be willing to read it and give me tips about things i could truncate and improve??
I would really appreciate it!! PM me for details. I'm a little leery of posting the whole thing in a publicly accessible forum...
How long is it?
Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Mon Oct 10, 2011 1:32 pm
by amc987
About 3.5 pages. OK I posted it here. Any feedback ppl have would be really appreciated!!! I am looking to cut and perfect this before I submit it!
Thanks in advance, guys and girls.
Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 12:29 pm
by amc987
Deleted. Will try to improve and repost.
Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2011 1:13 pm
by Justdoingmybest
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Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Wed Oct 12, 2011 12:03 pm
by amc987
Does anyone else have suggestions about how I could improve my DS??
Re: Need help with my DS
Posted: Thu Oct 13, 2011 3:33 am
by Blessedassurance
Well, we can't see it.