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Help me with my DS?

Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 9:31 pm
by jjlaw
Would anyone be willing to critique my DS? It is my first draft, and I would really appreciate any advice.

I would be happy to swap. Just PM your DS. Thanks in advance.

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