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I was little confused about your father. Were you raised by a single mother? You should make that clear earlier, because when you get to the part about your basketball coach becoming "like a father" it was a little confusing to me.

Yeah sorry I thought that might confuse people. My mother raised me by herself. My PS deals with the circumstances surrounding this and so I neglected to make it clear in my DS, but you're right that I should talk about this much earlier

Toss it

if you're going to say toss it, at least rip it a little first

nextplay43 wrote:if you're going to say toss it, at least rip it a little first

http://www.top-law-schools.com/forums/v ... 8&t=124792

does anyone have any more advice on what I should delete or what I should expand on more?