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So i'm applying for a week-long summer program. I have to write a maximum of a 500 word essay on diversity. I finished a really rough draft, and I was wondering if someone wouldn't mind looking at it, and giving me some feedback, and pointing me in the direction I should take as I work towards the final draft.

Thank you.

I'd be happy to take a look, if you'd like. PM it to me?

Feel free to PM me

I'll take a look at it.

PM me if you'd like.

This is from May 24th...let it go

Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!

Knockglock wrote:Actually it's still on the table...just had to take a long break from it due to the June LSAT.

It's due June 10th so I need to make significant re-writes and would appreciate if ppl could look at it at that point.

Thanks so much for reading it, MusicNutMeggie, your advice was really helpful!

Sure thing. Gooood luck!

PM'd TrialJunky. Thank you so much! And thank you soooo much again MusicNutMeggie, I forgot to respond to your PM and I feel bad! especially since you gave me such great advice and criticism!