Please critique my withdrawal letter

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby Snoopy1216 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:09 am

BenJ wrote:Try this one instead. It works wonders.


Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

Over the course of this year’s law school admissions cycle, I have submitted applications to many excellent law schools such as yours. Unfortunately, no matter how compelling the establishment, a student can only attend one of the fine institutions to which they apply. I regret to inform you that you have not been selected for my attendance in the autumn of 2010. Nonetheless, your eminent quality convinces me that you will matriculate other top scholars this fall. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Sincerely,
XXXX


*COPY AND PASTED* That's bomb and I'm ready to send.
now if some school i like can take me soon, that's be great

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:11 am

When GULC waitlisted me a day after I withdrew nicely, I replied with

Go ahead and withdraw me.

Desert Fox

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby BenJ » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:13 am

Snoopy1216 wrote:
BenJ wrote:Try this one instead. It works wonders.


Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

Over the course of this year’s law school admissions cycle, I have submitted applications to many excellent law schools such as yours. Unfortunately, no matter how compelling the establishment, a student can only attend one of the fine institutions to which they apply. I regret to inform you that you have not been selected for my attendance in the autumn of 2010. Nonetheless, your eminent quality convinces me that you will matriculate other top scholars this fall. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Sincerely,
XXXX


*COPY AND PASTED* That's bomb and I'm ready to send.
now if some school i like can take me soon, that's be great


Let us know how it goes. :lol:, I had fun writing it but would never actually send it.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby Snoopy1216 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:17 am

Desert Fox wrote:When GULC waitlisted me a day after I withdrew nicely, I replied with

Go ahead and withdraw me.

Desert Fox


Hahahha I would like to have seen their faces

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby john titor » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:19 am

what kind of loser sends a withdrawal letter? if you really want to do the people on the waitlist a solid, just call whatever secretary is in the admissions office and say "My name is John Jones, and I'm withdrawing from consideration." Then hang up the damn phone and go do something besides post neurotic crap like this on TLS.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby TTTennis » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:20 am

BenJ wrote:Try this one instead. It works wonders.


Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

This year, due to the effects of the economy, I have submitted more applications than should be allowed. As such, there has been an increase in both the quantity and quality of the schools I have been accepted to. Your offer has received its initial review and I am very impressed with your qualifications. At this point in time though, I am unable to accept your request. I hope you will give my spot to someone who would be more appreciative. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Peace Biatch,
XXXX


Fixed.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:26 am

Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.


you didn't get into cornell right?

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:27 am

calicocat wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.


you didn't get into cornell right?


They knew I had a sense of humor and shit canned my app.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby booby87 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:29 am

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:30 am

Desert Fox wrote:
calicocat wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.


you didn't get into cornell right?


They knew I [strike]had a sense of humor[/strike] was a dumbass and shit canned my app.


ftfy <3

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:31 am

calicocat wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:
calicocat wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.


you didn't get into cornell right?


They knew I [strike]had a sense of humor[/strike] was a dumbass and shit canned my app.


ftfy <3


Minnesota? That's still in Canada.

<3

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:33 am

Desert Fox wrote:Minnesota? That's still in Canada.

<3


NorthwesTTTTTTTTTTTTTern

that's all

<3

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby panda » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:43 am

Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

:roll:

hth.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:44 am

panda wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

:roll:

hth.


I would have fun with you ;)

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:45 am

calicocat wrote:
panda wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

:roll:

hth.


I would have fun with you ;)


Credited.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby panda » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:46 am

calicocat wrote:
panda wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

:roll:

hth.


I would have fun with you ;)


<3 let's do it. and then tease DF because he's not invited.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby TTTennis » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:47 am

Desert Fox wrote:
calicocat wrote:
panda wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

:roll:

hth.


I would have fun with you ;)


Credited.


ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby panda » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:48 am

TTTennis wrote:
ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


who are you?

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:48 am

TTTennis wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:
calicocat wrote:
I would have fun with you ;)


Credited.


ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


oh, we've met.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby TTTennis » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:49 am

panda wrote:
TTTennis wrote:
ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


who are you?


Some dude.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby calicocat » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:49 am

panda wrote:
TTTennis wrote:
ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


who are you?


lol credited

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:49 am

TTTennis wrote:
Desert Fox wrote:
calicocat wrote:
panda wrote: :roll:

hth.


I would have fun with you ;)


Credited.


ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


Oh we are acquainted. I'm her new life coach. She doesn't know yet though, don't tell her.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby TTTennis » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:50 am

panda wrote:
TTTennis wrote:
ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


who are you?


Who are you? I like your outfit.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby panda » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:51 am

TTTennis wrote:
panda wrote:
TTTennis wrote:
ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.


who are you?


Who are you? I like your outfit.


creeper.

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Re: Please critique my withdrawal letter

Postby 09042014 » Tue Feb 16, 2010 12:52 am

ITT: 1337 loser exclusion




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