Your writing, is of course, really crappy. And, what's more, you make rather poor arguments. But, I do beleive, that of course, you must realize, that writing like this, is annoying. And, yes, I do beleive, that you should stop, writing like this.
What are you talking about? I think his writing is just swell! Here, for instance, is an example of a real jewel of a sentence:
Thane Messinger wrote: I owe you all an apology, as my message veered into the snide tone that is a major part of the problem among a group of extremely talented individuals who, unfortunately, have a need for others to know just how talented they are.
Obviously this guy is a cunning wordsmith, who never leans on sentence fragments bordered by commas, to conceal the fact that what he's saying, isn't actually interesting in the slightest.
Edit: I was actually so impressed that I made a picture to commemorate this joyous thread!