can you critique my LOCI?

tuc00318 · Postby **tuc00318** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:31 pm

Hi Everyone,

I'm not sure if this is the proper place to post this, but I have been wait listed at Temple Law and it is one of my top choices. I have written a letter of continued interest, but I wanted someone to critique it for me. PLEASE PM ME IF YOU ARE INTERESTED/CAN GIVE ME GOOD FEEDBACK AND TELL ME EXACTLY WHAT I SHOULD CHANGE AND HOW TO CHANGE IT.

Thanks!

Yukos · Postby **Yukos** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:41 pm

Is it written in all-caps?

tuc00318 · Postby **tuc00318** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 8:50 pm

No, but thanks for asking

20141023 · Postby **20141023** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:22 pm

simplycatalina · Postby **simplycatalina** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 9:56 pm

tuc00318 wrote:Hi Everyone,

I'm not sure if this is the proper place to post this, but I have been wait listed at Temple Law and it is one of my top choices. I have written a letter of continued interest, but I wanted someone to critique it for me. PLEASE PM ME IF YOU ARE INTERESTED/CAN GIVE ME GOOD FEEDBACK AND TELL ME EXACTLY WHAT I SHOULD CHANGE AND HOW TO CHANGE IT.

Thanks!

I was accepted and am withdrawing. Hope it opens up a spot for you! And I'm happy to read over it if you want. PM me.

Yukos · Postby **Yukos** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:32 pm

OP styled all over me via PMs. I actually would've read her LOCI too except I don't have any idea what one is supposed to look like.

ManOfTheMinute · Postby **ManOfTheMinute** » Sun Feb 17, 2013 11:41 pm

cbarlow1016 wrote:I was accepted and am withdrawing. Hope it opens up a spot for you! And I'm happy to read over it if you want. PM me.

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