How does my C&F statement look

[dsn32]

Thanks to everyone who helped!

[2014]

Looks fine. People often suggest having a statement conveying regret/growth somewhere which you don't so you might consider that, but if you sent it as is I imagine you would be totally fine.

[Swimp]

"...myself and a group of friends were discovered..."

That's grammatically incorrect. Otherwise it's fine.

[dsn32]

Thanks to you both, two good pieces of advice!