Please Critique my Addendum

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Gov2408
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Please Critique my Addendum

Postby Gov2408 » Mon Nov 28, 2011 8:13 pm

Hey guys, here it is! Thanks for the help!

Dear *** Admissions Committee,

As demonstrated by my transcript, standardized tests are not indicative of my future performance. The ACT, which is supposed to be a key indicator in terms of academic performance in college, did not accurately gauge my abilities at *** University. I received a score of 21 on the ACT, yet I currently have a 3.94 GPA and am in the top 2% of my class. Similarly, I believe my LSAT score of 153 will not be indicative of my future performance in law school. Therefore, I feel that my GPA is a more accurate indicator of my academic performance at ***Law School. Given my academic accomplishments, work experience, and desire to study at *; I am confident that I will bring a positive contribution to *** Law School.


Respectfully,

Gov2408
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Re: Please Critique my Addendum

Postby Gov2408 » Mon Nov 28, 2011 10:36 pm

Please?

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rinkrat19
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Re: Please Critique my Addendum

Postby rinkrat19 » Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:02 pm

It's fine, but don't address and conclude it like a letter. Just put your identifying info in a header.

Name
LSAC Number
Addendum for XXX Law School

[ADDENDUM TEXT]

CanadianWolf
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Re: Please Critique my Addendum

Postby CanadianWolf » Mon Nov 28, 2011 11:12 pm

Delete the last two sentences.

Gov2408
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Re: Please Critique my Addendum

Postby Gov2408 » Tue Nov 29, 2011 1:06 am

Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!




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