Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

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whoevencares
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Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

Postby whoevencares » Mon Oct 24, 2011 10:58 pm

thanks
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quiver
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Re: Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

Postby quiver » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:10 pm

I think it's pretty good. One alteration I'd suggest is taking out this sentence:
whoevencares wrote:I have also examined the financial cost of Law School with great prudence and have planned accordingly.
Not really necessary and, to me, it signals only negative connotations about the school. I'd just leave it out.

whoevencares
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Re: Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

Postby whoevencares » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:11 pm

haha thanks, That's the exact sentence i was thinking about editing out too.

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Re: Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

Postby theadvancededit » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:29 pm

whoevencares wrote: This necessitated a 3-hour window between leaving home and arriving to campus everyday. I typically returned home by the same means of transportation. This resulted in a three-hour commute, each way.

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Re: Is my GPA Addendum Suffice? or should I think twice?

Postby whoevencares » Mon Oct 24, 2011 11:32 pm

Thanks, great edit it sounds much better that way.

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