Addendum Critique Forum
- kiwi4president
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Addendum Critique
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Last edited by kiwi4president on Thu Nov 17, 2011 9:20 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Addendum Critique
You probably should write more about each thing...I think your repeated breaking of the law might be a problem, so make sure to separate the events and make it clear that they were under different circumstances?
- MrBain_
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Re: Addendum Critique
If you haven't provided context in another essay, you should do so here. Especially since there's a trend, and especially since the latest arrest was two years ago. Just something that shows you accept responsibility and it won't be a problem in the future. Hopefully, there's something tangible you can point to to show this growth (such as volunteering at a drug program).
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