Addendum Critique Forum

[kiwi4president]

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[Curious1]

You probably should write more about each thing...I think your repeated breaking of the law might be a problem, so make sure to separate the events and make it clear that they were under different circumstances?

[MrBain_]

http://youtu.be/yk3EBmiURgw

Be sure to add this link for the admins.

[bp shinners]

If you haven't provided context in another essay, you should do so here. Especially since there's a trend, and especially since the latest arrest was two years ago. Just something that shows you accept responsibility and it won't be a problem in the future. Hopefully, there's something tangible you can point to to show this growth (such as volunteering at a drug program).