SôngHươngNúiNgự wrote:Criticize the suggestion, not the man. If you don't think my suggestion carries credibility, so be it.
I'm not criticizing, I'm asking. I'm asking because too often on this forum people give advice that they are unqualified to give. I feel qualified to answer the OP on this topic, as I teach English grammar and writing. If, however, you were a published writer (or something of the sort), I would have offered to the OP that both of our answers could be correct.
I would caution the OP to solicit advice carefully, and synthesize the advice you receive in order to form your own conclusions.