Traveling the Middle East PS
Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 11:35 am
I'm in the final round of revision for my PS, and any advice/critique would be very helpful. With 3.26 and a 171, does this all give me a chance for T-14? Thanks!
The stench was bad, but my worry that the van would fall apart distracted me. Nestled snugly between a distinguished Syrian gentleman and a mysterious wanderer we had just picked up from the desert, I sat eagerly as our overcrowded van cruised along the fabled Euphrates in eastern Syria. The driver held a begrudging respect for me, a respect I had earned after learning the hard way that a price is rarely fixed and never fair. The men in the front spoke exuberantly to me with frantic gestures amidst broken English, while the women sat silently in back. I had grown to love my good-humored conversations with these welcoming, yet complete strangers, and strangely enough, it is these conversations that drove me to study law.
As I developed my usual rapport with the other passengers, the tone of the conversation changed abruptly. The newly emboldened stranger pointed at me and exclaimed about the “Qur’an”, “America” and “Allah.” As the elder gentleman to my left leaned over my lap and shouted furiously at the man, I realized that I was caught in the midst of a cultural war. I combed their words for any indication of what was happening, but before I could discern the intentions of the stranger, he signaled to the driver that the desolate and unending scenery to our right was his destination. Once he disembarked, the man sitting in the front immediately turned to me, almost embarrassedly, and exclaimed in a heavy Syrian accent, “He’s crazy.” To my surprise, the van was on my side. I later realized that this dispute was a microcosm of my experience in the Middle East – an overwhelming majority of unquestionably hospitable people whose global image was spoiled by the outspoken invectives of the few.
As I sat literally torn between the cultural hostilities in the battered van in eastern Syria, I realized the fundamental need for conflict resolution through rational debate, rather than aimless shouting. However, I also realized that without legal mediation to facilitate disputes, arguments like these are more likely to end in mindless bickering than a sensible resolution. During my undergraduate studies in philosophy, I developed a commitment to judicious discussion, and through my very real experience of a conflict that occurred over my very lap, I decided to study the law.
However, my experiences during my travels encompass only a portion of my desire to study the law. My previous passion for philosophy and foreign languages first prompted my aspirations, long before my two-month journey across the Middle East. I majored in philosophy at Xavier University, which led me to an unconventional study abroad program in Rome. Rather than follow the blueprint of typical overseas study, where students live in an American subculture within a foreign country, I chose the road less traveled and organized my own study abroad program at the Pontificia Universitá di San Tomaso d’Aquino, one of Rome’s preeminent philosophical institutions. Although obtaining a visa and finding an apartment provided its fair share of headaches, given the Italians’ unique enthusiasm for everything except what you need, organizing my own program gave me both increased responsibility and complete freedom in one of the world’s most thriving and historic cities.
Here my fervor for philosophical inquiry and aptitude for absorbing foreign languages fiercely collided in graduate level course work conducted in Italian. The youngest in my classes by at least five years, I engaged in a highly competitive intellectual environment where I was expected to produce exceptional work in a foreign language. Although daunting, learning philosophy in another language forced me to scrupulously understand an argument, giving me the ability to break issues down to their logical parts and analyze their relationship. Furthermore, by working in a foreign language in an unfamiliar environment, I became acquainted with performing well in uncomfortable situations. Because a lawyer is constantly faced with the pressure to perform under demanding conditions, I believe that these skills will be indispensable in my legal studies.
My diverse background in philosophy and foreign cultures provides me a solid motive to confront the challenges of law school. After experiencing the need for conflict resolution in the bastion of conflict and studying under the auspices of philosophical greats in Rome, I have decided that law is the best application of my talents and experience. The need for rationality is not isolated to an overcrowded van in eastern Syria, and with a background in philosophy, a legal education and a significant exposure to foreign cultures in hand, I hope to eventually enter into conflicts like the one that I experienced and be able to reach a reasonable resolution through rational debate.
The stench was bad, but my worry that the van would fall apart distracted me. Nestled snugly between a distinguished Syrian gentleman and a mysterious wanderer we had just picked up from the desert, I sat eagerly as our overcrowded van cruised along the fabled Euphrates in eastern Syria. The driver held a begrudging respect for me, a respect I had earned after learning the hard way that a price is rarely fixed and never fair. The men in the front spoke exuberantly to me with frantic gestures amidst broken English, while the women sat silently in back. I had grown to love my good-humored conversations with these welcoming, yet complete strangers, and strangely enough, it is these conversations that drove me to study law.
As I developed my usual rapport with the other passengers, the tone of the conversation changed abruptly. The newly emboldened stranger pointed at me and exclaimed about the “Qur’an”, “America” and “Allah.” As the elder gentleman to my left leaned over my lap and shouted furiously at the man, I realized that I was caught in the midst of a cultural war. I combed their words for any indication of what was happening, but before I could discern the intentions of the stranger, he signaled to the driver that the desolate and unending scenery to our right was his destination. Once he disembarked, the man sitting in the front immediately turned to me, almost embarrassedly, and exclaimed in a heavy Syrian accent, “He’s crazy.” To my surprise, the van was on my side. I later realized that this dispute was a microcosm of my experience in the Middle East – an overwhelming majority of unquestionably hospitable people whose global image was spoiled by the outspoken invectives of the few.
As I sat literally torn between the cultural hostilities in the battered van in eastern Syria, I realized the fundamental need for conflict resolution through rational debate, rather than aimless shouting. However, I also realized that without legal mediation to facilitate disputes, arguments like these are more likely to end in mindless bickering than a sensible resolution. During my undergraduate studies in philosophy, I developed a commitment to judicious discussion, and through my very real experience of a conflict that occurred over my very lap, I decided to study the law.
However, my experiences during my travels encompass only a portion of my desire to study the law. My previous passion for philosophy and foreign languages first prompted my aspirations, long before my two-month journey across the Middle East. I majored in philosophy at Xavier University, which led me to an unconventional study abroad program in Rome. Rather than follow the blueprint of typical overseas study, where students live in an American subculture within a foreign country, I chose the road less traveled and organized my own study abroad program at the Pontificia Universitá di San Tomaso d’Aquino, one of Rome’s preeminent philosophical institutions. Although obtaining a visa and finding an apartment provided its fair share of headaches, given the Italians’ unique enthusiasm for everything except what you need, organizing my own program gave me both increased responsibility and complete freedom in one of the world’s most thriving and historic cities.
Here my fervor for philosophical inquiry and aptitude for absorbing foreign languages fiercely collided in graduate level course work conducted in Italian. The youngest in my classes by at least five years, I engaged in a highly competitive intellectual environment where I was expected to produce exceptional work in a foreign language. Although daunting, learning philosophy in another language forced me to scrupulously understand an argument, giving me the ability to break issues down to their logical parts and analyze their relationship. Furthermore, by working in a foreign language in an unfamiliar environment, I became acquainted with performing well in uncomfortable situations. Because a lawyer is constantly faced with the pressure to perform under demanding conditions, I believe that these skills will be indispensable in my legal studies.
My diverse background in philosophy and foreign cultures provides me a solid motive to confront the challenges of law school. After experiencing the need for conflict resolution in the bastion of conflict and studying under the auspices of philosophical greats in Rome, I have decided that law is the best application of my talents and experience. The need for rationality is not isolated to an overcrowded van in eastern Syria, and with a background in philosophy, a legal education and a significant exposure to foreign cultures in hand, I hope to eventually enter into conflicts like the one that I experienced and be able to reach a reasonable resolution through rational debate.