PS help!! Critique PLEASE!!! (Active duty military, CPA/MBA)

[pleex]

Hello guys! Happy Holidays! I am looking for compensated critique on my PS.

I am an active duty service member in the Army, have a MBA degree and passed all CPA exams. I am applying schools in California. English is not my first language so I am desperate for some grammar checks also. Please PM me if you are interested!!

Thank you ALL.

[KENYADIGG1T]

PM me--I have some time to burn.

[wannabegenius]

PM me too -- I'm extremely bored and will give you diligent feedback because I am that bored

[Cmoney $$]

PM me, I'm active duty as well. I'd be happy to take a look.

[NavyNuke]

Willing to look it over for you. Also, if you haven't reached out to service to school yet, you should!