Is this a PS or DS?

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superpickle
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Is this a PS or DS?

Postby superpickle » Tue Oct 17, 2017 3:36 am

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A. Nony Mouse
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Re: Is this a PS or DS?

Postby A. Nony Mouse » Tue Oct 17, 2017 6:55 am

I feel this is much more of a PS than a DS, but I can't give you scientific reasons for that.

I find the equation of "mom worked long hours" with "dad hit us" (which is kind of hinted at more than expressed) a little off-putting, frankly, especially since the mom working thing is dropped and not explored at all, and doesn't seem to connect to the trajectory you otherwise draw of your life.




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