I have written a VERY ROUGH first draft of my PS and I wanted to focus on being Biracial and kind of how that affected me growing up/ the person I am today. I'm not sure if my point has gotten across or if it may be coming off in a negative way or if it just doesnt flow at all! Is there anyone that could give it a proofread and let me know if I should continue on this path or abandon at all cost? I am desperate for some direction and pointers!
Thank you so much!
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I'm happy to take a look!
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