Advice on cutting down a long PS for my top choice

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ri.co
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Advice on cutting down a long PS for my top choice

Postby ri.co » Fri Sep 29, 2017 11:35 pm

Statement currently at 661 words, but need to cut it down to 500 words for my top choice. Wanted advice whether to perhaps split into two statements or if I can continue cutting and keeping the main idea.

PM me and definitely willing to give feedback on yours.

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KENYADIGG1T
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Re: Advice on cutting down a long PS for my top choice

Postby KENYADIGG1T » Sat Sep 30, 2017 1:02 am

ri.co wrote:Statement currently at 661 words, but need to cut it down to 500 words for my top choice. Wanted advice whether to perhaps split into two statements or if I can continue cutting and keeping the main idea.

PM me and definitely willing to give feedback on yours.


Why 500 words? Also what's the school? I should be able to help cut the PS down anyway. PM me if ya'd like.

ri.co
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Re: Advice on cutting down a long PS for my top choice

Postby ri.co » Sat Sep 30, 2017 1:12 am

KENYADIGG1T wrote:
ri.co wrote:Statement currently at 661 words, but need to cut it down to 500 words for my top choice. Wanted advice whether to perhaps split into two statements or if I can continue cutting and keeping the main idea.

PM me and definitely willing to give feedback on yours.


Why 500 words? Also what's the school? I should be able to help cut the PS down anyway. PM me if ya'd like.


UC Irvine. Thanks.

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DorkothyParker
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Re: Advice on cutting down a long PS for my top choice

Postby DorkothyParker » Tue Oct 03, 2017 3:20 pm

I'm just a 0L, but I can help you edit down. PM me!




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