Round 2

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Platopus
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Round 2

Postby Platopus » Fri Jul 28, 2017 12:35 am

If anyone is interested, I would greatly appreciate feed back on my 2nd/3rd 5th draft of my PS. I've substantially changed the focus, but not the topic, of my essay, so I would really like to hear feedback on whether it's any good.

Of course, I am happy to read others, including any 2nd drafts, if I've already read yours.

PM me if you're interested.
Last edited by Platopus on Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:05 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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calmike
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Re: Round 2

Postby calmike » Sat Jul 29, 2017 9:54 pm

sure pm me!

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tuna_wasabi
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Re: Round 2

Postby tuna_wasabi » Thu Aug 03, 2017 12:27 pm

PM me :) I believe I've read yours before

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Amerision
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Re: Round 2

Postby Amerision » Thu Aug 03, 2017 1:02 pm

Swing it over!

omorewa
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Re: Round 2

Postby omorewa » Thu Aug 03, 2017 1:16 pm

Happy to do it!

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Platopus
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Re: Round 2

Postby Platopus » Thu Aug 10, 2017 7:12 pm

tuna_wasabi wrote:PM me :) I believe I've read yours before

Amerision wrote:Swing it over!

omorewa wrote:Happy to do it!


Sorry gals/guys, I decided to rewrite, again. So hopefully Round 3 will be ready by this weekend if you are still open to giving it a read.

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Platopus
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Draft 5

Postby Platopus » Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:04 pm

Bumping for Draft 5. Decided to pretty much scrap my previous PS. Any readers out there? I'd be happy to give yours a read.

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usaorbust
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Re: Round 2

Postby usaorbust » Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:32 pm

Happy to give it a read. My PS isn't ready yet but would you read my DS?

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bwaldorf
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Re: Round 2

Postby bwaldorf » Fri Aug 18, 2017 1:47 am

I'm class of 2020, but I received a ton of compliments on my PS from adcoms (not sure how common this is). I also did mine on a risky-ish topic if anyone would like ideas on how to go about writing something like that. I got a lot of help from TLS when I was applying and have some free time this weekend so I'd love to pay it forward. PM me if you'd like an extra pair of eyes!

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MrAdultman
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Re: Draft 5

Postby MrAdultman » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:07 am

Platopus wrote:Bumping for Draft 5. Decided to pretty much scrap my previous PS. Any readers out there? I'd be happy to give yours a read.


I'd be happy to give it a read. I largely rewrote mine as well and wouldn't mind your thoughts.




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