First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

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tuna_wasabi

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First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby tuna_wasabi » Thu Jul 13, 2017 10:36 am

I'm considering using this as a PS, but for now it's a DS.

Willing to swap or review your draft PS too.

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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby zkyggi » Fri Jul 14, 2017 7:04 pm

Will do. Send it over.
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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby Platopus » Sat Jul 22, 2017 10:34 pm

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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby DowsingForAJD » Sat Jul 22, 2017 10:55 pm

I'm happy to trade too if you'd like another set of eyes.
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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby rosieposie12 » Sat Jul 22, 2017 11:07 pm

Happy to trade, send it over! :)

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Re: First attempt at DS. Harsh criticism appreciated.

Postby tuna_wasabi » Mon Jul 24, 2017 11:22 am

rosieposie12 wrote:Happy to trade, send it over! :)
DowsingForAJD wrote:I'm happy to trade too if you'd like another set of eyes.
Platopus wrote:Happy to trade, send it over
zkyggi wrote:Will do. Send it over.


Thanks guys! I decided to start over since I wasn't too happy with my writing style--hope you would not mind if I send it 2-3 weeks from now :D Feel free to PM me yours for feedback in the meantime



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