Could you please critique my LOCI?

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Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby Anonymous User » Fri Mar 03, 2017 3:24 pm

I was waitlisted in mid-Feb and have seen no movement since. It seems likely that I've been YP'd - I got into a number of equally or higher ranked schools. I have reasons for wanting to attend this one, however - it is the best school in a city where I have a lot of family and person stake. However, I don't want to come off as overbearing in how much I'd like to practice in this city. Please critique?

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Thank you very much for your time.

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby 180pedia » Fri Mar 03, 2017 7:42 pm

I'll proof read it and scan it when I get home!

Just let me know that you haven't already sent it out.

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby Anonymous User » Fri Mar 03, 2017 9:52 pm

180pedia wrote:I'll proof read it and scan it when I get home!

Just let me know that you haven't already sent it out.


I have not.

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby 180pedia » Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:05 pm

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby mjb447 » Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:17 pm

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby 180pedia » Fri Mar 03, 2017 10:41 pm

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby Anonymous User » Mon Mar 06, 2017 12:04 pm

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby 180pedia » Mon Mar 06, 2017 5:46 pm

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby Anonymous User » Tue Mar 07, 2017 4:26 pm

180pedia wrote:
I'd post your question in the Mike Spivey thread or law school admissions thread IMO... in worst case, make a burner account (I don't know if you can post anon there)



Okay I sent it out, could you please delete the above? Thanks!

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Re: Could you please critique my LOCI?

Postby 180pedia » Tue Mar 07, 2017 4:34 pm

Anonymous User wrote:
180pedia wrote:
I'd post your question in the Mike Spivey thread or law school admissions thread IMO... in worst case, make a burner account (I don't know if you can post anon there)



Okay I sent it out, could you please delete the above? Thanks!


Done - no problem; good luck.




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